Analysing Another Pitch

For my other pitch to analyse i chose to do George Hextall, from watching the animoto it was clear to me that he wanted to try and create a hip/hop rap magazine. A problem i think he would come across is; in the rap industry there is a clear divide between a stereotypical American rappers and a English rappers, the difference being that American ones are usually muscly black men whereas the English type being tall white men. A good point in his pitch was he unconventional colours, with the yellow if used correctly will make the cover stand out but it may look too unprofessional if the placing of colour is not done with care. From his pitch i didn't know what or who he was going to have on his cover, which was a problem in envisioning his magazine. His typical audience suits the style of the magazine perfectly as most rap followers are young around the 16 plus age.