Improvements On My First Drafts

These are my updates that i made to my draft hand in, my main improvement is the contents page where i completely re-designed the style of it so it has more of a music magazine feel of it. on the cover i made the image bigger so it drew the on looker in and added a better cover line and gave one to the main band of the magazine. finally on the double page spread there wasn't much improvement needed, all i did was changed the size of the columns so that they fitted all on one half of the page and then i changed the title fonts to fit in with the font on the cover.